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5 Mistakes Corrected for you in a shaving cream
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Please accept a tube to try—feel the difference
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When we started to make a shaving cream, we looked to see what men complained about in the ones they use at present. Here are the mistakes they pointed out. Too much rubbing. Too much lather. Slow action. Too sticky and dry. Many big cans. Skin irritation. We overcame these mistakes. And changed the whole situation. Men by the millions flocked to Palmolive Shaving Cream. If you once place it near your brush, the success becomes a business institution.
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7 years study back it We sought experts as you know. Our Palmolive Soap is a leading toilet soap. Two men who discarded 130 formulas before we offered Palmolive Shaving Cream. We made an emulsion, the opposite idea of most men in shaving creams. We adopted the method used in Palmolive Soap. We prepared a soap solution, then added super-purified oils and mixed with amazing thoroughness. Men say that this is the best shaving cream they ever used. We know it. But, judge it for yourself. Try and note comparison and note results.
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Learn why thousands of men are flocking to this new shaving creation Accept, please, a 10-day tube to try